My feelings about this reading were kind of all over the place. With that said, I am going to compartmentalize my various responses to the reading. I’ll start with what I thought was positive, then a couple of questions I had, and then the areas I thought were most useful.
First, Helen Sword’s Writer’s Diet was already included in my syllabus for undergraduate courses during the revision part of the semester in the composition courses I teach. I’ve been using the diet as a pedagogical tool for about 4 years. Students respond very well to this exercise and I encourage everyone to use it in their classrooms and for their own writing. It was exciting for me to be able to read more from someone whose tools I’ve been using for so long.
The way Sword structured the book is very effective. I find narrative to be the most convincing way to inspire people to take action and the amount of experience from real people she included was certainly inspiring. Ending each section with tips was also useful as it summarized the chapter and provided guidance to the reader on how to take action. In particular, I appreciated that she emphasized how important reading is to the writing process.
To highlight a chapter, The Other Tongue was particularly intriguing to me. If anyone has ever taken a linguistics course on the structure of prescriptive grammar then they likely have experienced learning academic English almost as a foreign language. (Maybe it was just me?- twice). Native speakers take grammar for granted and so when it comes time to apply the rules of spoken grammar to written grammar many native speakers struggle because the two are not the same. When it comes to Standardized American English (SAE), non-native speakers of English who have mastered English grammar in a structured environment can often produce very well-written pieces of writing because they understand the grammar in a way that native speakers often do not. By contrast, a native speaker (myself included) who will often say “it just sounds right” when it comes to grammar usage and figuring out how to properly structure sentences. I often try to help L2 learners of English with their grammar because it also opens me up to learning more about English.
As a quick aside, I contest that SAE is actually akin to a foreign language to even native speakers because the rules are different than spoken English. SAE is an outdated dialect of English one must work towards mastering through practice and structure. Sword points out the necessity of practicing SAE several times in the book and actually says that most writers acknowledge that their writing improves through freeform natural writing rather than a structured environment with a focus on SAE. The propriety of SAE is completely political and arbitrary and should be abandoned as the standard in academia.
As far my negative criticisms, my big one is that I don’t understand who the audience is for this text. As I’ve said, I use Sword’s Writer’s Diet in my undergraduate courses. There is also some utility for myself and academics across the spectrum. However, Sword’s intended audience seems to be people who are well into their careers as academics which leaves me wondering, exactly to whom is she writing? The tips were good but at the advanced level felt like a given. Undergraduates and beginning graduate students seem like the audience who would benefit most from the text but she writes to established professional academics who can close their office door to students and just focus on writing.
Secondly, I think there is so much context here that the text makes writing seem like a daunting herculean task. Her text attempts to mitigate those feelings but I feel like there is so much in the book that it’s undercutting the intended message.
My negative criticisms are not meant to imply that I don’t think the work has positive takeaways. I’ve already plugged the Writer’s Diet several times. Her tips are incredibly useful and she sets them up through easily digestible chapters and a narrative approach to educating the reading. Additionally, as has become the tradition, I took the BASE assessment and pasted my results below.

It seems immodest to post results that seem self-congratulatory but here they are. I think the reason why I struggled to identify the utility of this text for advanced academics and, also, the reason for my confidence as a writer is that I have been forced to develop strong writing habits out of necessity during my time as an undergraduate. I have always worked demanding full-time jobs while studying and so had to become an effective writer and learn to adapt many of the tricks and tips that Sword suggests. Perhaps, then, I take for granted a lot of the wisdom in this book. Overall, yes Sword’s book is full of useful tips but, no, I don’t think I was able to fully benefit from her guidance.





